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Sunday, October 22, 2006

chapter 148: convinced

[Streets]

Seeing how it was late by the time their date ended, Ah Biu (Raymond Lam) insisted on going with Joey (Bernice Liu) to find Ah Mun (Nancy Wu), the salesgirl who worked at "White Dreams" the night of Ah Hoi's murder and was the only other person there besides Joey, Rose (Kenix Kwok), and Michael (Kevin Cheng).

[Apartment Building]

"Thank you for coming with me," Joey smiles at Ah Biu.

He rings the doorbell for her. The two of them wait patiently for someone to answer the door. Joey prays that Ah Mun was at home. She didn't want to wait another day. She had to get answers.

"Coming!" They hear a female voice from inside the apartment say. Though muffled, Joey recognized that it was Ah Mun's voice.

"Who are you?" Ah Mun asks when she opens the door.

"Do you remember me? I was at 'White Dreams' last night, you serviced me!" Joey says.

Ah Mun immediately replies, "No, I don't know what you're talking about. I don't remember anything. I never worked for 'White Dreams.'" She tries to close the door, but Ah Biu puts his foot between the door and the doorway. He grimaces. "Oh! I'm so sorry," Ah Mun apologizes.

"Please, you remember me." Joey begs.

"No, I don't know you. Please leave me alone." Ah Mun pleads.

"Why are you doing this? It's obvious you are who we think you are," Ah Biu states.

"Please, just go..."

"You are my only hope. If you don't help me, no one can." Joey begins to cry.

"Miss! Please, don't cry."

"Then help her!" Ah Biu says.

"I can't." Ah Mun shakes her head vigorously. "Please, just go... leave me alone. I already said yesterday that I don't know anything. I was unconscious the whole time. Really, I was! I don't know who killed whom or what happened. I didn't hear anything nor did I see anything. Please..."

"You were so scared that you peed on yourself! When we found you, I saw the look in your eyes. You must know something," Joey frowns.

"It's a natural reaction! Everyone feels scared if they've been threatened with a knife and tied up to a corner! How could I not be shaking and scared to death?"

Ah Biu pulls out his police badge, "You're disrupting the legal system. If you're not truthful and tell us all that you know, we can press charges later."

"I don't know anything. Please, please... leave me alone."

Wiping her tears, Joey sighs. "I was wrong. I thought you were so sweet and helpful... I suppose I'll just have to lose my happiness then. Thank you anyways and sorry for bothering you." She turns around. "Ah Biu, let's go."

"Are we going to leave like that?" he questions as he follows behind her.

They were about to step into the elevator when Ah Mun opens the door and calls out, "Wait!"

[Ah Mun's Apartment]

Joey and Ah Biu were seated on Ah Mun's couch.

"Do you want tea?" she asks.

"No, we're good."

Ah Mun sits down on a chair near the couch. "The reason I invited you in... was because of what you said..." She pauses, unsure of how to continue. "You seem very sweet, you do, and I want to help you, but who will help me?"

"What do you mean?" Ah Biu questions.

"If I help you, you'll want me to make it an official statement for the police, isn't that right?"

"Well yes, that's how it works," Ah Biu says.

Ah Mun frowns and grows silent.

Joey's eyes travel from Ah Mun to Ah Biu. She clears her throat and says, "Ah Biu, I'm really hungry. Can you go buy me some snacks?"

"What?"

She lowers her voice and whispers to him, "She won't talk if you're here. Just go."

"Oh..." Ah Biu stretches and declares, "All right. I'll take my time choosing the right snacks for you." He winks at her before leaving.

"Is it because of him... that you wouldn't talk?" Joey asks. "He's not really that intimidating, is he?"

"Oh no, your boyfriend's nice but..."

"My boyfriend? Oh no! You've got it wrong... he's just a friend."

"I'm sorry." Ah Mun blushes. "I'm not afraid of him. I'm afraid of what he represents."

"You're afraid of men? Did you get harassed or something?"

"No. It's not him or his gender... it's his job."

"Being a police cadet?" Joey asks with surprise.

Ah Mun nods her head slowly.

"But why? They protect us!"

"You mean they protect you."

"They'll protect you too if you're in danger."

"They won't..." Ah Mun lowers her head.

"How can you say that? You're a tax-paying and law-abiding citizen. Your protection by Hong Kong's police force is guaranteed!"

"I'm not..." Seeing Joey's confused look, Ah Mun continues, "I'm not a legal citizen of Hong Kong..."

"What? Are you an illegal immigrant?" she blurts out.

Ah Mun rushes over to cover her mouth. "Keep down your tone! I don't want anyone to find out."

Joey nods her head. "It makes sense now... why you didn't want to have anything to deal with the case and why you were so afraid to talk with Ah Biu here…"

"Yes..."

"It doesn't matter if you're not a legal citizen! You're still a good person."

"That doesn't matter. If they catch me, they'll send me back... So please, never tell anyone." Ah Mun has a begging look in her eyes.

Joey frowns. "Why don't you become legalized then?"

"My family needs money, so I have no choice but to risk it and work illegally in Hong Kong..."

"I'm sorry to hear that."

Ah Mun blushes. "I'm so sorry! You didn't come to listen to my story. Why am I making this about me? It's about you..."

"It's okay. I understand."

"You were saying, before you left, something about losing your happiness if I don't help you?"

Joey nods her head. "The only man I love is getting married to another woman."

"I'm sorry to hear that..."

"So I need to find out what exactly happened last night, because it could help me to win him again. The girl I went with, I suspect that she did something very bad."

Ah Mun trembles upon hearing Joey mention Rose.

"Ah Mun, what's wrong?"

"I'm sorry... It's just that when you mention her... I get so scared... I can't believe someone like her is capable of something so..."

"What are you saying?"

"I tremble thinking about her words and hearing what happened..." Ah Mun begins to shake. She huddles up into a ball.

Joey comforts Ah Mun and says, "It's all right, calm down. Let me make you some tea." She brings her a cup of herbal tea, which Ah Mun gladly takes and devours. Seeing Ah Mun's great reaction to her memories of last night, Joey became ever the more suspicious. Whatever it was that had happened, she was now sure more than ever that Rose was definitely guilty of something.

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20 Comments:

Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

I'm not going to lie - this was a mostly filler-ish chapter. However, the next chapter is excellent. :) Hopefully you guys still enjoyed it even though it's not one of the better chapters.

22.10.06

 
Blogger lily said...

its not bad i enjoyed it even though its short hopefully you will update again soon

22.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

Quite an interlude you've given us. :P I suppose the next chapter requires some setting up. Shall await the excellence then ;)

"they've been threaten"
"Ah Mun beings to shake"

22.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

lily - Glad to hear that! Yep, I'll update again very soon. Don't worry. It won't be another month again. Haha. :P

tkn - Oh my god! Audrey - is that you?! Geez... for the past week I thought you disappeared on me again and I gained a new reader. >_<

23.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

LOL! Either way, it's quite a balance. Losing one and gaining another. Or, not having lost or gained any. :P TkN is my official online identy, which I only adopt for sites I feel "at home" with. :)

23.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

tkn - Ah! So it is another development in our "relationship." :) You went from anonymous to Audrey to tkn. Haha. I hope the "name change" stops here. :P For me, I'm just Metal wherever I go. Haha.

24.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

It stops here, unless I go change my name at City Hall. TkN are my initials. :)

24.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

Argh I feel so deceived... all this time I believed your real name was Audrey! :(

27.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

LOL! "Audrey" means noble strength; I've yet earned this definition. :P [Besides, I'd never turn my back on my roots and adopt an English name.]

BTW, aren't you glad I never mistook that your real name was Metal :P Out of curiosity, why this nick?

27.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

You're so deep. :P

Since you've upset me, I will keep you wondering why my nick is "Metal." Haha.

28.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

You're mocking me now? :P

Let's see... your real name is Thành, to succeed. But apparently, your ambition is unattainable with the normal strength of the human race, so you depict yourself as an alloy warrior :P

I'm way off, non? lol.

28.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

Ack! You stalker! How did you know my real name?! It's so unfair you know mine and I don't know yours. :(

You give me too much credit. "Metal" is a vestige from childish days. Haha. Never did I imagine that it would become an "infamous" name in the TVB community. You'll have to wait for the final Remember to learn the history behind my name. Hehehe.

28.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

You can guess what my initials stand for, can you not, Mr. Lâm? :P

I'll be waiting for your "Remember" article then, along with the Winglin one you promised long back. It'd be amazing if you can publish it before October ends to continue your "returns" theme. :) Also a great method of garnering votes for your various categories. :)

BTW, enjoyed the ending of FH? I love the last case most, though the murderer was too predictable.

28.10.06

 
Anonymous cherrie said...

you left me on a cliffhanger!!!!! update update!!!!!!

29.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

tkn - LOL. Of course Ms. Nguyen. Unfortunately, I still only have the skeleton of my Remember: Winglin article and there is no way I can finish in time. I have an organic chemistry test in 2 days and a physics test in 4 days. :( Remember will just have to wait for November. Hehe. I won't comment on Forensic Heroes here because that will be counter-productive to your enjoyment of my next 2 FH posts. ;)

cherrie - Your wait isn't that long. I'm going to update the next chapter today! :D

29.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

Mr. Lam, perhaps it may surprise you to know that T is my surname, and N's my first.

29.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

Argh! You're just full of tricks aren't you?!

29.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

Tricks? A bit early for Halloween, aren't we? :P Click on my nick if you want to know what my real name is. :P

29.10.06

 
Blogger MetalAZNWarrior said...

Hahaha, so the answer was only a click away. Wow your blog is so nice and your entries are very interesting and deep!

29.10.06

 
Anonymous TkN said...

I half-expected for you to only click the "About" page and figure my name, then exit. :P

To you, anything green is nice. :P

29.10.06

 

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