chapter 166: the fun's just begun
[Shanghai, "F&B" Company]
Carrie (Natalie Tong) greeted Ah Nin (Frankie Lam) and Joey (Bernice Liu) as they entered "F&B" company.
"Carrie!" Ah Nin grins. "Long time no see. How are you?"
"I'm great. Chris, you're finally back; you too, Joey." Carrie smiles sweetly as she pushes her glasses up the bridge of her nose. "It's a reunion."
"How are things with everyone?" Ah Nin asks.
"Same old, same old," Carrie says as she leads the two of them into the meeting room. The other "F&B" employees greet Ah Nin and make small chit-chat with him as they passed them.
[Meeting Room]
"How does it feel to be back here?" Joey asks.
"It's weird coming back as a client. I worked here for the past two years. Not much has changed... just like 'Ka Yan' is like how I left it. Although I don't remember why I left in the first place..." Ah Nin shrugs. He looks out of the window. "Shanghai sure is beautiful."
The sound of high-heels clanking against the floor could be heard coming from outside of the meeting room doors.
Carrie opened the door to reveal Rose (Kenix Kwok), who held her nose up high. Her make-up was harsh and dark. Gone were the soft, pastel colors that she used in the past to give herself a natural look. "Chris, Joey, what a pleasure." Rose grins. "Carrie, excuse us."
"Let me know if you need anything." Carrie closes the door behind her.
Rose sat down on the big chair at the head of the table. "Joey, aren't you usually so chatty? Chris, don't tell me you're feeling shy. Come on, we're discussing business here. I have to feel happy! Otherwise, why would I give my business to you?"
"Miss Suen," Ah Nin finally says as he clears his throat.
"So distant? Chris, we've slept together. Call me Rose."
"Miss Suen, please keep private matters out of this. Let's be professional. This is a business meeting room."
"Oh, Chris. Chris, Chris, Chris." Rose shakes her head and laughs.
Joey presses her lips tightly together as she looks in concern at Ah Nin.
"Joey, how are you, dear? Since I've been gone, have you slept with Chris yet? I know you were looking to get into his pants."
"Miss Suen! Please watch your words!" Ah Nin yells.
Rose gets up and walks towards Ah Nin. "Just look at your anger. It's a shame we aren't having sex." She runs her finger down his chest.
He pushes her away and stands up. "Miss Suen! This is the final warning. If you don't act like a professional, we're calling this meeting off."
"Oh please..." Rose laughs. "Do you think I hold you and your measly business deal in my eyes? I have more money and power than you'll ever have."
"Joey, let's go." Ah Nin grabs Joey's hand and tries to run out of the door.
"Ah, so we're that close already, huh?" Rose smirks.
Ah Nin tries frantically to open the door, but it is, however, locked. "Let us out!" he orders.
"Honey, you're a guest in my house. Until I say you can, don't you even dare to think you can leave." Rose cackles.
"What do you want?" Ah Nin asks.
"What do I want? What do you want? I gave you my virginity! You said you'd marry me. But what do I have now? Nothing. Now you dare to ask me what I want?" Rose slaps Joey. "You left me for this bitch."
Joey covers her face.
"Rose! What's gotten into you?" Ah Nin demands.
"You finally call me by my name, huh? I helped you get back up after your accident. I helped you earn so much money. Yet, you treat me like this..."
"If it wasn't because of you, there wouldn't have been an accident! I wouldn't have been in a coma! I wouldn't have lost my memories! I wouldn't have been deceived for so many months by you!" Ah Nin screams at the top of his lungs.
Rose claps her hands. "Very good! You've said all that you've wanted, haven't you? Deep down, I know you still love me."
"I don't love heartless bitches like you."
Rose laughs as she makes her way back to her chair. "We have unfinished business."
"We have nothing. It's over. There's no longer any relationship between you and I." Ah Nin pounds on the door. "Carrie! Anyone? Let us out."
"Oh, Chris. Have you forgotten where you are? You're a guest in my house. Do you think people would turn against me and open the door for you? You're much too silly. Have you not woken up from your coma yet?" Rose snickers. "I'll say what I said to Joey again. There's only one way out... and that's by your corpses being carried out."
Ah Nin grows tense. His throat feels dry. "What do you want?"
"Depending on how I feel, you can die with less pain... or..." she smiles, "more."
"You deserve to be locked up," Ah Nin scowls. He runs towards the window and bangs on it. "Help!"
"Oh, honey, did you forget that my family runs this town?" Rose approaches Ah Nin from behind and hugs him. "Why don't we have a go at it for one last time... for old time's sake?"
"Let me go!" Ah Nin orders and moves back towards Joey.
"I see... so you want to play it that way. Very well." Rose walks over to a table and opens a drawer. Out of it, she takes out a gun and a long knife. "What a pity. It seems like we'll have to rush into business..." She places the items on the long meeting table.
Joey and Ah Nin exchange scared looks.
"Rose, don't do anything you'll regret," Joey begs.
"Oh, dear... sweet little Joey is begging me again. To think of it, this will be the third time that I try to murder you. The last two, I failed... but don't you worry my dear, I will succeed this time."
"You're crazy. Let us out of here!" Ah Nin yells.
"If you kill us, there's no way you're getting away with murder again," Joey insists.
"Oh really? This is Shanghai. I can get away with whatever I want." Rose grins. "Now, who's first?"
"Rose, why are you doing this?" Ah Nin asks.
"Why?" Rose laughs. "You ask me why again? You broke my heart. You threw our engagement ring onto the ground like it was some worthless piece of junk. You totally disrespected me and disregarded our relationship. You shattered our memories. You broke us!" Rose yells.
"None of it was real from the start. You were dishonest since the beginning," Joey says.
Rose slaps Joey. "Was I talking to you?" She turns towards Ah Nin. "You'll pay for what you did to me."
"And what about what you did to me? You took away my memories! You might as well have killed me."
"Oh, Chris... I may have taken away your precious memories of Joey, but I've given you much more. Money, power, sex... you could have run Shanghai with me. Don't you think I'm an upgrade from this slut?"
"Don't you talk about Joey like that. She's way above your level. She has something you'll never have... her dignity."
Rose spits on Ah Nin's face. She grabs the gun off of the table and then points it at the two of them.
Joey holds on tightly to Ah Nin.
The sight of the two of them sickens and upsets Rose. "This is what you two want... isn't it, to die together? Well, ha! It isn't going to be like that. You're dying on my terms. First, I'm going to scratch up Joey's pretty little face. Then... I'll give her the treatment I gave Ah Hoi. Then, Chris... it will be your turn. I'll use you first and then chop it off once I'm done. Oh and then... I'll let you have a taste... of what it feels like to have my bullet penetrate your brain." Rose cackles evilly.
Ah Nin is both disgusted and terrified. He could no longer deny it. He had to now admit that the Rose he had spent the past year with was a fake. Before, he could lie to himself and think that perhaps she was not so bad, but with reality looking at him in the eyes, he could not deny it. "All this time... you were faking." Ah Nin says in a hushed tone. "When Joey told me you were this horrible person, I couldn't believe it. I didn't believe it until I saw you with that gun trying to kill Joey. Now, I can't believe that I believed you were sincere for all those months. I was truly blind." He turns to look at Joey. "I wish I knew the truth sooner."
"I also can't believe you are this wicked..." Joey comments.
Rose turns and grabs the knife off of the table with her other hand. She smiles. "Oh, you have no idea. It's just beginning..." She lashes towards Joey with the knife, but she and Ah Nin dodge around the room. "This room isn't big. I'll get you eventually." She cackles.
"I won't let you kill Joey," Ah Nin says.
"You won't let me?" Rose laughs. "Your life isn't exactly free from danger yourself."
Finally, Rose gets them into a corner of the room. "Oh, how fun this is..."
Abruptly, the door of the meeting room is kicked open.
"Kam Nin, Suen Seung Sum, the two of you are under arrest for charges of operating an underground market of illegal drugs. You have the right to remain silent."
A squad of police officers stood before the three of them.
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13 Comments:
Oh my... what a graphic and sexually charged chapter this was. :P Haha... it's been awhile since I wrote it, so reading it again, I was a bit shocked at how raw, unladylike, and graphic the language that Rose used was, but it is intentional.
I got goosebumps reading what Rose planned to do.
Finally, I've revealed the truth about "F&B" company. :D Does it shed a new light on Rose's family secret? More concrete truth will be revealed in chapter 168 when Rose is in jail...
Chapter 167 brings back those dresses that I said was an important clue... ;)
16.6.07
I'll finally know about the dresses then. I can't wait :)..
Hehe..not to be picky..but shouldn't it be
"It's just the beginning..." instead of It's just beginning..." ? :P
I liked this chapter. Rose is as evil as I don't know what....just too evil (she's like Lady Macbeth!) As heartless as she is...I really believe that very very very deep inside her (that's why you never see it), there is a heart in there that is kind. =)..But I guess it will never resurface after what she has done. I like how you said she changed her looks - she's showing her true self and not covering herself with soft make up to 'pretend' that she is an innocent girl.
Hmm..but why is Ah Nin being arrested with Rose? You won't tell me until the next chapter =P. I love how Joey and Ah Nin are so together =)..they're definitely a wonderful couple. Hehehe... Can't wait until the next chapter!
16.6.07
By the way, I like your new section in your column "the latest on". Pretty cool =)
16.6.07
you always leave a cliffhanger!!
it's really nice to see Ah Nin defending Joey. thay are a great couple! =) and the underground market of illegal drugs is the secret Rose is keeping from Ah Nin all these while!!
and i like how you show Rose's true colours by the make-up she uses!! from pretending to be a sweet lady to a harsh and dark persona! you are brillant!!
keep updating!...please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter! =)
17.6.07
Oops..nevermind =(..I have no right to correct people *shakes head*it works both ways!...Hhehehe..anyways..Yea..GOODJOB! =D (i hate my english =P)..I'M SO SORRY!
17.6.07
Hi. I haven't actually followed this fanfic of yours since I didn't watch VOH (only catch a few episodes when I'm back to my hometown) and your fanfic has already gone a long way when I first visited your site. But, I'm curious to know, besides the canon VOH cast, what actors have u added into your story? I only know Raymond Lam and Kenix Kwok are in it.
17.6.07
bigsmile - Did you know about the dresses before? :P It's okay! I appreciate you trying to point out a possible typo. It happens. I'm not perfect. Lol.
I tried to mimic Sheren Tang's Heaven Sword and Dragon Sabre transformation when she turned "evil" by having Rose wear harsh, dark make-up. It gives her a scary appearance.
But actually, this make-up is a farce. She purposely put dark make-up on to reflect her bitterness and to show that she means business (i.e. revenge). In a way, she's preparing to act out a 'role' (remember that Rose loves to act and is good at it)... and this time, she's a big bad villian, so you see her taking her 'evilness' to the extreme.
The true Rose wears no make-up.
michx - Hehe if I don't end on a cliff-hanger, you guys won't anticipate the next chapter. :)
The next chapter is actually not a direct continuation of this chapter. You'll see when I post it up. It will shed more light on this whole "illegal drug market" though...
kidd - Actually, you don't need to watch VOH in order to read my fanfic. It's totally original and if I allude to events in VOH, I will do a quick summary directly in the chapter so there's no way you can get lost. I took ammends to cater to every possible reader.
Main-cast wise, the following are the new characters that are added to the cast...
- Ron Ng
- Charmaine Sheh
- Sheren Tang
- Tavia Yeung
- Bosco Wong
- Leila Tong
If you have the time, feel free to read the story. :)
17.6.07
A few chapters back, you said that the dresses played a big part in something to do with Rose when I tried to get some kind of spoiler out of you (I didn't succeed =P). So yeap..you can say that I did know about the dresses before =P...but you only mentioned that the dresses were important.
Yea - that's why I like it when people have no make up on (even though I am a girl =P). It shows people their true self and I think it gives me a feeling that they won't lie about or hide anything (which I know is not true..it's just the feeling) =P..hahaha
It's kind of ironic how Kenix and Frankie are acting like this in your fanfic (I LOVE how you portray them =D) whereas in real life, they're actually a really, really cute couple =)..
18.6.07
bigsmile - Hehe I know, that's why I purposely casted Kenix for the role of 'Rose' - besides the fact that I love her crying and acting and she can turn on and off the waterworks in seconds, which is required for the role.
18.6.07
cliffhanger xD I hope Ah Nin would get out of trouble... "She places the items on the long meeting table." <-- couldn't they snatch it from her c[=
I think you're straying from the usual VOH mood lols it been so dramatic the last few chapters. but nonetheless, this is super fabulous fanfic. Update soon. Thank you for taking your time to write this long fanfic [=
18.6.07
Emilyy - LOL! Um, I guess they were too scared to do anything? Hahaha.
The whole season 2 has been dramatic and dark. I can't do much until Rose's storyline is resolved. Season 3 will be a recovery back to light-hearted, funny chapters.
18.6.07
I'm trying to understand Rose's motive(s) in this chapter. I don't want to think she truly planned on murdering Chris and Joey. Was it to convince Chris of her evilness (so he could move on)? [Specifically referring to... "He could no longer deny it. He had to now admit that the Rose he had spent the past year with was a fake."] But then, Rose does not appear to be the considerate type; more so, she is not aware of Chris' doubts toward her persona. Most likely (though I don't want to think it), she is at the point where she's beyond crazy and does want to have their secret be buried in the grave... *shivers*
And yay, my question regarding the word choice of "protect" is now answered. Both Rose and Chris were involved in the illegal drug market (though Chris was obviously oblivious to the entire ordeal). In a way, Rose was protecting him (and herself) with his memories being lost. And her dad is out of town, hmm? Perhaps already arrested?
24.6.07
TkN - Two chapters ago, Rose said she's out for revenge.
I'm so glad someone recalls the subtle detail about Mr. Suen not being at home. ;)
This is why Rose said in the chapter when she killed Ah Hoi, there's not just love between them. He knows her family's secret. Also, in chapter 21...
"Rose, where is Chris?" Mr. Suen (Michael Miu Kiu Wai) demands.
"He left with his family for Hong Kong."
"You let him out of your sight?"
"I'm sorry, daddy."
"What are you doing just sitting here? Go to Hong Kong with him!"
"I need to get some things ready first. I told him that I would meet him in Hong Kong later."
"You mustn't let him remember what happened that day. If he does, then you and me, we're..."
Ah, how I've left so many clues. ;)
24.6.07
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