chapter 168: illegal secret
[Shanghai, Police Station]
It turns out that the police had been investigating "F&B" company for some time now suspecting that the fashion company was a farce for an illegal drug trade. They finally had concrete evidence about the crime. Someone had tipped them on an outgoing shipment and where to find the hidden drugs.
Rose (Kenix Kwok) was stunned when her lawyer couldn't be reached and no one came to bail her out. She had tried to reach anyone she could think of, but no one, not even a maid or one of her father's men, could be reached, or rather, no one showed up. Alone and without anyone, Rose had no choice but to be detained at the police station's jail for 48 hours.
[Rose's Cell]
"Damn it! Damn it all to hell!" Rose was biting her nails. "Where has everyone died off to? Why isn't anyone here? Why am I still here?"
She shakes her fist in fury. Her blood boils. "Daddy pays good money to keep all of our dogs, where are they?"
Suddenly, Rose comes to a realization. She stumbles onto the bed in her cell. She is stunned. She gasps, finally putting together what had happened. "It was Daddy..." she mutters under her breath.
[Flashback]
"Rose, before you go off to Hong Kong to retrieve Chris, there's something I want to give you two," Mr. Suen (Michael Miu) says.
"What is it, Daddy?" Rose approaches her father's desk.
He hands her a folder and smiles. "It's an early wedding present."
Rose is surprised. She opens the folder and sees a thick legal contract. "What is it?"
"Rose, honey, you know that Daddy is getting old. It's time that I sign the company over to you and Chris."
"You are such a joker! You are still in your prime. But besides that, we're not even married yet. Don't you reckon it's too soon?"
He shakes his head. "No, the timing is just right. Sign these papers and let him sign it too. The company is going to be transferred under you two's names. You'll be in complete control. I trust you two."
Rose smiles and hugs her father. "Thank you, Daddy!"
"You deserve it. It's the best present Daddy can give you. You have everything else. I know you and Chris are very capable."
[End of Flashback]
Rose had taken those papers and had Ah Nin sign them when she came to Hong Kong. Afterwards, she sent the papers back to Shanghai for her father. She had quickly scanned the papers, but didn't read them thoroughly. "Damn it! He signed away responsibilities he had with the company. This is all coming down on Chris and I. Damn it! No wonder he's not in Shanghai. He must have known that the police were onto him and ran away." Rose was furious. Her father had betrayed her after she worked so hard to keep their family's secret.
"Damn you, Daddy! How can you let your own daughter take the blame for this?"
[Flashback]
It was the big day. Rose planned for Ah Hoi (Michael Tong) to attempt to run over Ah Nin (Frankie Lam) again that day. She had called Ah Nin to meet her in the park. She was going to engage in some pleasant conversation with Ah Nin and then Ah Hoi would suddenly come and run him over.
Rose smiles when she sees Ah Nin appear. He, however, wore a very furious expression on his face. He held a folder of some sort in his hand.
"Chris!" Rose waves her hand at Ah Nin.
He throws the folder down on the bench where Rose stood by.
"What's wrong?"
"I'm disgusted!"
"Chris, what happened?"
"You know very well what you did. I thought I was working for an honest company, but I was wrong." He shakes his head in anger.
"Chris, you're not making any sense."
He lifts up the folder and opens it for Rose to see. He shows her pictures of packets of drugs in-between fabrics.
"I don't get it." Rose is thoroughly confused. She looks at Ah Nin.
"I accidentally found these in-between the fabric of one of our out-going shipments," Ah Nin says frankly.
"Huh?"
"Don't act dumb."
Rose starts to cry. She pleads, "Chris! I really don't know what's going on. Please, tell me!"
"I know what you did! I'm going to tell!"
"Chris! Wait! Why won't you explain to me what happened?"
"I'm taking this to the police. They're going to investigate and expose whatever it is that your company is doing. I quit!" Ah Nin picks up his folder of evidence and then quickly runs off. Rose trails behind him, screaming his name. In this moment of fury, Ah Nin crosses the street, not seeing the fast-approaching car. It collides right into him. He rolls across the top of the car and lands on the road. Blood begins to leak out. Rose covers her mouth, horrified.
She sees Ah Hoi in the driver seat and quickly gives him the signal to drive off.
Reaching for her cell phone, she dials for an ambulance as she approaches the still Ah Nin. He still held the folder. She scans the scene while talking on the phone, quickly retrieving the folder and placing it in her purse. "Oh god, Chris... What have I done?" Her eyes are full of sorrow.
[End of Flashback]
Rose laughs. "It's so ironic that Chris discovered my family's secret before I did."
[Flashback]
Rose rushed home as soon as she could after attending Ah Nin to the hospital after the accident. She barged into her father's study. Mr. Suen was enjoying a cigar.
"Daughter, what happened?"
Rose takes out the folder and places it on her father's desk.
"What's this?" He asks.
"Chris told me he found drugs within the fabric of our clothes." Rose says.
"What?!" His eyes bulge out. "What did you say?"
"Chris found drugs in our clothes."
"Where is he now?"
"He's in the hospital. He got ran over."
Mr. Suen sighs a sigh of relief. "Thank god. Let's pray he doesn't make it."
"What?" Rose was astonished to hear the cold-blooded words coming out of her father.
"If he lives, we die."
Rose stares blankly at her father. "Huh?"
"Oh daughter, my innocent Rose." He smiles.
Rose finds herself trembling. "Daddy... what do you mean?"
He gets up from his leather chair. "Do you think our family would be so rich and powerful if we only ran a fashion company?"
"Daddy, I-I don't get what you mean."
He continues to smoke his cigar and smile.
"Daddy, please tell me." Rose's heart is pounding.
"Your ancestors were great, do you know that?"
"Yes, they went from having nothing to being one of the wealthiest."
"Ah, if only it was such a simple success story."
"Huh?"
"Our ancestors are some of the smartest people ever. They used their brains to get that rich."
Rose laughs nervously. "Well, of course... that should be the case."
"Oh Rose," he shakes his head and smiles.
"Daddy, you're not making any sense."
"Your ancestors conned."
"What?"
"They tried to make an honest living... but what good was it when they still came up short regardless? What's better than to take money that's already been earned?"
Rose's heart was pounding.
"Ah, what a sucker those Tsui's were for having such a stupid daughter. They lost everything and no one had any idea."
"Y-y-you mean to tell me that our fortune was all attained by conning?"
"At the beginning, yes, but now, it all rightfully belongs to us. We worked to maintain this."
Rose was stunned speechless.
"Oh, the 1930's... your grandfather told me so many stories about it. No one dared to disrespect a Suen. We were the most powerful mafia in Shanghai. We ran the city. Everyone had to answer to us..."
"But the drugs...?"
"The more illegal something is, the more profitable." Mr. Suen grins proudly. "Your grandfather and I thought up this ingenious plan to market drugs... who would ever think to find drugs hidden in-between fabrics of expensive clothing?"
Rose is shocked. Her jaw drops. Her eyes stare unblinkingly at her father. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. "But we have such a good reputation in the fashion industry!"
Mr. Suen smiles. "Of course. If we didn't have such a good reputation, do you think our shipments could escape the eyes of the government? Who would suspect that 'F&B' is actually shipping more than expensive clothes?" He laughs.
Rose shakes her head. "This can't be true! Our clothes are fabulous. People love 'F&B' designs!"
"They do. That's why we have such a good reputation."
"But you said from the start you and Grandpa used the fashion company as a cover up!"
Mr. Suen laughs. "Your thinking is much too simple. Our family does the best of both worlds. 'F&B' is a legit fashion company. The drug market is a side thing we do to earn a little more."
"This is illegal!" Rose shouts.
"It isn't if no one knows about it." He puffs on his cigar some more.
Rose can't believe everything that she just heard. She had thought her family's company was a prominent fashion company with honest business and nothing to hide. It had turned out that it was hiding a very dirty and illegal secret. She falls to the floor and sobs silently. "Chris was right... It's all fake..."
Mr. Suen gets up from his chair and comforts the crying Rose. "Daughter, what's wrong?"
"It's wrong! We shouldn't be doing this. Our family has enough money. You told me we retired from the mafia world after grandfather died!"
"Fashion goes in and out of style. Drugs are always trendy. We can never lose."
"I'm here! We don't have to do this. My designs can earn enough money!" Rose pleads.
Mr. Suen shakes his head and smiles. "Oh, Rose, you have much to learn."
"What if we get caught? The consequences are dire!"
"We haven't gotten caught for so many years."
"But Chris found out!"
"I know, which is why we have to take care of him immediately." Mr. Suen says sternly.
"What?"
"If he dies, no one will know."
"Daddy, I love him!"
"If he wakes up and tells the cops, we're done for."
Rose frantically says, "He's at the hospital now. You can't do anything to him anyways."
Mr. Suen laughs. "There's nothing I can't do. We have people at the hospital."
Rose trembles. "No, Daddy, please don't!"
"Rose, there are other boys out there for you. Besides, if I'm not remembering incorrectly, you aren't even his girlfriend. Why do you care so much about him?"
"Daddy, I'm begging you. Let's wait until after he wakes up and go from there. Who knows? He may wake up and not remember any of it. Please."
Mr. Suen reluctantly agrees.
[End of Flashback]
"Chris, don't you know that I look out for you?" Rose's eyes start to water.
[Flashback]
Rose was at the hospital again. She looks at the comatose Ah Nin.
"Oh Chris, when are you going to wake up? You will wake up, won't you?" She sat down by his side and took his hand. She places it on her face. "Please wake up."
She sighs, remembering the secret he had discovered before his accident. Silently, she ponders, "Maybe it's better for you not to wake up."
Rose laughs to herself. "I'm so stupid. Why did I tell Ah Hoi to run you over? Life can't be played around like this. I just wanted you to forget everything and love me. Now, you're not even awake to tell me that you don't like me. Oh, Chris..."
She caresses his face with her hand. "I'm so sorry." She lays her head down on his chest and weeps. After a few moments, she gets up and wipes her face. While looking at Ah Nin, she notices something strange. She sees twitching in his right hand. Rose gasps.
"Chris?"
Rose bites the bottom of her lip. "Please wake up and forget it all. Forget that you don't love me. Forget that my family has such a dark secret. Forget it all. Please. It's the only way you'll survive..." she prays.
[End of Flashback]
"You go and screw me over for that Joey (Bernice Liu). Do you know how much I did for you? How much I cared for you? How much I love you? I did so much! You wouldn't be alive this long if it wasn't for me."
Rose shakes her fists in the air. She feels defeated. However, the thought of Ah Nin going down with her made her happy. "Joey won't have Chris. She will never have him! He'll die with me and be with me in death." She laughs.
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23 Comments:
Poor Rose... she has lost it all. Her father has ran away and put the blame on the whole illegal drug market on her (when she didn't want to involved in the first place). She has lost all power. No one is afraid of her anymore... so unafraid that not one goes and bails her out of jail. But she won't lose it all. Rose plans to drag Ah Nin down with her...
Finally, almost every secret about Rose's story is revealed. :)
I really liked this chapter and the scene with Rose talking to the comatose Ah Nin at the hospital. I know the whole history of the Suen's is a bit farfetched and unrealistic, but it's a fictional story. :P And yes, their history is a direct reference to The Price of Greed.
1.7.07
On a side note, I was shocked when I learned that The Brink of Law also had a family owned fashion company doing illegal side business. How dare TVB copy me. :P Haha...
Rose will reflect more on everything that has happened in her life and all that she has done in a future chapter. And no, before anyone suggests or thinks it, Rose will not be going crazy at any point of the storyline. She will be 'mentally stable' (and I use this term loosely as Rose isn't mentally healthy in the least bit) until her final scene. :)
1.7.07
The Brink of law is very interesting...u'll nv expect the ending to be like tht....and omg, all the girls in this series are so pretty! Esp Bernice! Her styles and dressing so beautiful!
I like ur fanfic..very interesting...u should become a scriptwriter for TVB..
1.7.07
Ahh, many thoughts surfaced.
When you revealed that chapter 163 wasn't all fluff and that the dresses were a significant clue, I immediately linked them to F&B's illegal drug market, which was revealed in chapter 166. Indeed, my suspicion proved right in chapter 167. And when you said you're glad someone recalls Mr. Suen's absence, which was followed with a wink, I at once winced when my imagination ran wild. This time, I didn't want to be right. But argh!!! What a parent.
This chapter, expectedly, reveals more layers to Rose. She is quite vulnerable, and such vulnerability exemplified with her "evilness". It is sad that her innocent nature keeps shattering from a tainted and haunted past. But she is also to blame. Her selfishness is the ultimate vulnerability. Selfish people could never be happy. I hope in the end - or by season III - Rose could weed this characteristic out of her character. After all, she is one of the many who are "seeking happiness". I'm still contemplating her "leaving with a bang" statement, and still imagining my "white dream" of an ending. lol. But that won't be answered until many chapters to come...
Meanwhile, wonder how Ah Nin is holding in his cell (or perhaps Joey's father bailed him out)?
1.7.07
i really pity Rose. she is evil and mean because of her family's history. how can her father betray her? i wonder what's going through her father's mind when he betrays Rose...
Joey will bail Ah Nin out right?...i'm sure Joey and Ah Nin will have a happy ending=), since that was something VOHII left out.
hey Metal, if you write books i would buy and read them all!! if you became a scriptwriter, i would watch all your shows!!
thanks for updating! =D
2.7.07
anonymous - Thanks! :)
TkN - Argh... you are too smart or rather my 'spoilers' gave too much away. That's it. Next time I'm not saying anything at all. :X
michelle =) - Aww thanks. At the very end, you might even cry for Rose. :P
2.7.07
this chapter kinda confused me with so many flash baks hahaha!!! =D =P
no no i dun reali want chris an joey ending up 2gethr at end... wait... raymond is in this fanfic rite? bernice an raymond makes a veri cuti couple!!
metal, can u please tell me wat happened 2 other characters in this story? please! i 4got.. =P ...sorri...
2.7.07
Sorry for not commenting for so long, I just didn't have time to come and read your story.
Aww.. what a pitiful Rose! What kind of father is that? pushing his responsabilities to his daugther?! Have I told you that I love you... I mean that I love your story!!
3.7.07
abcdtvb - O_o That defeats the purpose of the story if Chris & Joey do not end up together. But their road towards 'peace' and 'happiness' is far from here. :P
Raymond's storyline with Bernice was only a 'side' thing I added to introduce his character earlier into the storyline and because I felt that "Joey" needed someone to help her along in her investigation. It helps that he's a cop. :P
The other characters are on the back burner as of now because Rose/Chris/Joey storyline is front and center. But basically...
- Ying Gei (Yvonne Lam) & Gam (Louis Yuen) are trying to have a baby (we last left off with her taking "charge" because it's his problem that's causing them not to be able to get pregnant... but I haven't addressed this change in their relationship yet... I will get back to it in season 3)
- Ah Yat (Joyce Chen) is having doubts about her career choice. In season 3, Ah Hong (Johnny Tang) will help her realize that her passion for acting is still there.
- Ah Yuet (Michael Tse) & Ah Lo (Bondy Chiu) really do not have a storyline right now. They are just taking care of their babies. :P But in season 3, they will be getting a storyline as someone enters the picture and upsets this family of 6.
- Fiona (Sherming Yiu) is still crazy and at the mental hospital. Ah Sing (Hawick Lau) says he would visit her every day, but as we will find out in an upcoming chapter... Ah Lam (Linda Chung) and Ah Sing's feelings for each other are growing stronger. Some time in season 3, they cannot deny that they love each other.
- We last left off with Ah San (Steven Ma) and Ah Lam meeting Ah San's supposed cousin - Ah Gan (Ron Ng) - and they were waiting for DNA results to see whether or not he is truly a family member. I should definitely follow up on this storyline. Lol. It's been 19 chapters since I last wrote about it. The last scene of theirs was them connecting again.
- Ah Biu (Raymond Lam) hasn't been around since since the night Rose's true colors were revealed. Joey hasn't contacted him since.
Hmm... I think that's pretty much all of the main characters. Boy, I have a lot of storylines going on including the as-yet-unfinished final part of Fiona's palatial drama. :P Season 3 will be introducing even more storylines. Hahaha.
3.7.07
Rain - Aww thanks for reading & commenting & loving my story when you have time. :) Don't worry, I understand. As long as you still come by and catch up, I'm more than happy.
Aren't you glad Ah Biu & Joey's sweet 'first date' chapter convinced you to read the fanfic? Haha. I have to say I love that chapter so much. :P I miss Ah Biu and Joey's bantering...
3.7.07
haha. I would love to say it's the former, and not the latter. But then, it's probably more fair to say great minds think alike. ;)
If I read correctly... you wrote no more spoilers at TVB Musings, right? ;)
3.7.07
TkN - Fine, we'll settle with that. :P Nope. No more spoilers in general. You and I think too alike so I am afraid you will be able to guess all of the twists should I open my mouth and give spoilers and hints. ;) Besides, back then I was only dropping so many spoilers because I was so anxious to let someone know what the real story was.
All of the juicy plot twists I was holding inside were getting to me. :P
4.7.07
Glad to know I am "someone". :P
Despite the no spoilers claim, I somehow know chapter 172 is a direct continuation from 171 and that chapter 175 might give readers the following reaction: o.O
Ahh, I must simply be psychic. :P
4.7.07
Psh. Don't act like you're so important. :P Too bad your 'predictions' will not be coming true. Haha. ;)
4.7.07
Who ever said it was an act? I am important. :P And my "predictions" not coming true only validate your own claim of being feeble. :P
But thanks for yet another hint. ;) haha.
4.7.07
Argh... guess I just have to keep my mouth shut then. :X
4.7.07
LOL thank-u's Metal for the info but who's fiona?? sorry... dunno the english name =P
4.7.07
abcdtvb - o_O Now I am wondering if you even read the story. LOL. Fiona is one of the main characters. She is Ah Sing's wife as well as a Princess.
4.7.07
ooo... LOL 2 b honest i didnt read those bgining parts ....sorry... =(
5.7.07
Lol... I see. :P
5.7.07
When is ah biu coming back? Bring him back soon please :D
6.7.07
Hmm... I really don't know when he will be coming back. His stint with Joey is pretty much done. I have one more chapter that I want to write to officially "close up" his romantic feelings for her, but that won't be until after Rose's storyline is done. At this point, I think he will probably make a brief appearance near the season's end some time in chapters 180's.
However, he will definitely be back for his own storyline in season 3 when we introduce his family and a whole bunch of stuff. :D
6.7.07
=D nice to know
an i reali sorri about that big confusion thingy =P
11.7.07
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